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Poetry review

"I absolutely love the poetry in this story! It's honestly adorable and hilarious! I recommend it to anyone who is bored"

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Poetry review

"I absolutely love the poetry in this story! It's honestly adorable and hilarious! I recommend it to anyone who is bored"

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A hard life's work

"The inner workings of your mind fascinate me. A hard life's work?! Excellent! Having lost my beautiful friend and beautiful Golden, I love the way your wrote the Dog poem... my favorite! You need to write more, for me if no one else."

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Intriguing and Imaginative

"The images used in these pieces create vivid colours in your head of the storylines. The grammar is stellar and the layout has been carefully considered. Great quick and interesting read with themes and subjects and also themes relatable to everyday people."

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Has to be Heard AND Read for a Proper Review

"This poem is interesting and deserves a second read, but I believe that with slam poetry it is mostly about the delivery. A proper review of a slam poem, I believe, would be both after reading AND hearing it read. Since I have not heard you read it I can not properly review it."

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