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monifa

"Now that's what I'm talking about!! far cry from evanora. i noticed that you work in a large span of genres. ive yet to read any other as of yet. but this was spectacular. I always knew those Egyptians were kinda freaky. i loved monifa, coming from her background she discovered how to work her way up and get what she wanted and survived. The story flowed smoothly and your descriptive skills are amazing. i think you found your notch in writing erotica. thank you for sharing."

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Monifa

"Monifa did well with variety 😏"

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Monifa A Handmaiden’s Tale

"A wonderfully saucy and interesting short story; very thought provoking "

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Exquisite!

"Great blend of history and passion. Nice plot, good character build, captivating !"

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Amazing!

"You combined two of my favorite things: Ancient Egyptian History and Romantic Erotica! Great work! It was sweet and hot AF! "

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Monica A hand maidens tale

"Wonderful story and a great read. insightful take on a timeless tale. Very enjoyable. "

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Monifa

"It has a promising story line."

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Consultant

"It is really a well written erotic novel adaptinging the harsh charecters of an ancient Egyptian king and his beautiful wife indulging in extra marital sex."

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Could be interesting

"So far, the story is predictable"

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