20 chapters read
"I like the way it draws you I and holds you with such intensity and I would recommend it to anyone who likes this kind of stuff"
20 chapters read
"I loved the book keep it up would love a book 2 "
16 chapters read
" Interesting "
20 chapters read
"Wow...for a short story this was totally amazing. I loved how your main character went through same difficult stuff and came out stronger. I loved it."
16 chapters read
"It does feel a little bit like author is rushing and trying to put so much into the character/plot but we will see"
16 chapters read
"Love the characters and the storyline!"
7 chapters read
"This is the first book for yours I have read. I'm sorry I can't tell you what I think of each chapter, but I will definitely keep reading. "
20 chapters read
"Great short story!!! Happy things turned out good for everyone. Saw few tiny typos. NOT as bad as some stories I have read!!"
15 chapters read
"This was a roller coaster of a ride. Had so much fun exploring Edania with Sylvia and her companions. Definitely keep up the good work. Maybe spend a little more time fostering character growth and development. What a riot! Loved! ❤️❤️❤️"
16 chapters read
"The writing style is a bit simple and the story line very shallow. But still fun to read."
20 chapters read
"This reads more like a draft than a finished story. For the most part, the author's technical writing skills are good. There are some grammar and punctuation issues that a careful reread will catch and easily fix. Some unnecessary sentences that repeat what we were just told make it slow reading in some areas. I appreciate the author wanting us to have lots of information but spreading the story out over more chapters would be a better way to deliver the information. The story has a promising plot but the story is written in a simplistic "tell the story and resolve the problems with a happy ending in an accelerated time period" style. I'd love to see the author give this story another try because it really does have the potential to be a 5-star tale. The dragons would make a great story all on their own--their characters and social structure was a great invention on the author's part. "
20 chapters read
"I read the entire story even though it’s not my favorite book "
16 chapters read
"It's free but it is really debatable if it is worth reading. Very immature writing style."