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Eerie and Unsettling

I enjoyed this. I feel like Sarah Johnson has a bigger story to be told. She's a compelling character, both creepy and unnerving. Even if she doesn't get her own novel, I would like to see more of her in the short. (**SPOILER ALERT**) It feels like there is a gap between where the boy goes missing and Sarah has him. I would like to see that interaction. Then, the fact that the police know where the boy is makes me believe that Sarah has been leaving behind breadcrumbs. I'd love to read that story.

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