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Good surprise!

"I clicked this story by mistake but what a happy accident it turned out to be! I loved the books so having a behind the scenes twist of Hermione and Snape working together was fun and clever. "

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Love it

"The story is amazing. I always had a crush on Snape so this is up my alley for sure. "

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Best story

"Your story was amazing I’m still thinking about it! You’re such a gifted writer. When can we expect the next one?"

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Im obsesed

"i read this and i love it . two things though the chapters are very short and it is hard to tell whos speaking at some times. but overal its lovely"

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Hermione’s other side

"I like the way the author has used parts from JK Rowling to make this book feel like a real extension. I also like seeing another side to snape. Perfect combination and very compelling. Can’t put it down"

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Sweet dreams taste of

"Interesting "

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Amazing

"Never thought the Harry Potter story could have such a dark desirable side...."

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Fantastic read

"I loved this book. The relationship of snamione can be a bit cringy at times. However, the storyline flowed really well. I was hooked from the start. "

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HP fanfiction better than the original

"Loved it, twist after twist not knowing exactly what was going to happen. Well written too."

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So good

"I don't want to ruin it by giving any spoilers but ... Yeah... If you're a Harry Potter fan this was amazing. I don't know which one I liked more... This one or the polyjuice ball... "

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Good story!

"It was nice reading it. Hope to read many more of your stories! "

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A wonderfully naughty read

"Really enjoyed reading this fanfic "

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