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Whispers of the heart

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Summary

A poem which is in simple words is not very complex.hope you love my work. It consists of one chapter.

Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
5.0 (6 reviews)
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1



"My core screeches within; love whispers from the wind.

Is my love in pain?

Gazing at unpleasant stars, chills run through me,

Taking me over the moon.

Tears hold my breath, dominating.

The rhythm in and out, cherishing every moment in life.

The soul-penned melody turns ruby to rose.

Pain within gives an unconscious embrace.

Everything is striding out, where is my engraved faith?

Questions drift inside me, what will be the end?

The breeze reassures me.

Love is all I crave.

Will this be the conclusion of my chronicle?

Through the misty veil of time, memories linger in my mind.

In the darkest nights, hopes are high that I'll find my way soon.

In the tapestry of life, love's trials make its victories sweeter."

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Your last line is beautiful!

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don't forget to give a review @scarletthorne

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Beautiful

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