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Is it Over??

"The world building, the characters and the notes. I loved everything. But is it really over""

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Bridging worlds(good)

"Let me start of by saying that this piece of work is amazing, not only is the grammar well written but they way the author makes us imagine this other world is gripping. Reading about Rosche’s growth as a character was one of the best parts. Amazing work. "

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5/5 Glitters! I love when Authors create their own ATTACKS!

"Penpalette's "Bridging Worlds" takes readers on an exhilarating journey through the realms of Arantle, a world beautifully crafted with four continents, twelve kingdoms, and an intricate history rooted in a past war against an unstoppable darkness. The aftermath of a war that attempted to lock away darkness sets the stage for political discord and conflict among kingdoms. Within this tapestry of intrigue and magic, readers are introduced to an array of fascinating characters, each contributing to the richness of the narrative. The allure of being an Eclipsarian, with the ability to manipulate time, adds a layer of fascination to the story. Penpalette's meticulous world-building extends to the eleven other magic types, each representing distinct archetypes or elements, creating a robust magical system that captivates the imagination. The writer's dedication to providing background information enhances the immersive experience, ensuring readers seamlessly navigate the complexities of Arantle. The attention to detail is evident in the vivid portrayal of various villages, contributing to a world that feels vibrant and alive. From the overarching plot to the smallest nuances is one of the reasons as to why i give this book such high praise. The unique names and well-explained concepts add depth to the narrative, making the fantasy world all the more enchanting. The story unfolds with beautifully crafted attacks, each with its unique name, ensuring that readers are constantly engaged. Move over Harry Potter, because Rosche has arrived to claim a well-deserved spot in the fantasy realm. This book,earns a solid 5/5 Glitters for its immersive world-building, well-crafted characters, and a plot that seamlessly weaves together adventure and imagination. Penpalette's creation is a gem that promises to captivate fantasy enthusiasts and leave them eagerly anticipating the next chapter in Arantle's spellbinding tale. I pray the author continues to pursue more Fantasy works, I believe this is their Niche even though this is the first book I have read from them, its a great first book in my opinion."

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A good fantasy

"Overall, this is a well-written story. There's a lot of description to help us imagine the world and the form of magic that's used. While the writing itself is very good, the pacing for me is rather quick. We jump from place to place in each chapter, and sometimes it feels more like I'm reading a summary rather than a full-fledged chapter. We're told the feelings of the characters rather than garnering some of it from dialogue, which there isn't a whole lot of. Technically, this was also good. There were a few areas where auto correct may have changed some character names, but otherwise, there's nothing to complain about there. "

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The love of this book

"I love this book it is fantastic. The fact that it has mystery and suspense makes me not want to stop reading it. The magical yet mesmerizing storyline and words that are being used makes you think that you are in the story . It is fascinating the way the story unravels so smoothly and majestically. I really love this story, so keep up the amazing work, dear writer. I can't wait to read more. This book will definitely become a hit "

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Good book!

"Very complex reading experience. It is great and has a good story line. Can't wait for more! 🌺"

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Enthralling and Intriguing lore

"You can definitely tell the author did a tremendous amount of research and planning before writing this novel because of the intricate worldbuilding that leaves you breathless. A well-crafted start to an adventure fantasy with flowery language and a compelling plot. "

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Very intriguing story!

"The story is told by a narrator who is telling the reader about a magical world and what is happening to the protagonist and the world around. It's told in almost like a poetic way. The bird view of the story is usually not something that I like to read, but the plot, good writing and story was so intriguing and the chapters was good "bites sizes" for me so I continued reading. The story isn't complete, but so far I like it! "

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A story that is sure to keep you invested

"An extremely well thought out storyline can be seen unfolding right from the very start. A well written fantasy story that gives me vibes from my childhood stealing my siblings' novels to read. Those who like Harry Potter may enjoy this as well."

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A journey in itself

"A very rich and elaborate tale... Definitely not for the lazy reader. With a gripping start, some compelling initial chapters full of detail and vivid descriptions, "Bridging Worlds" augurs a literary experience as magical as the world that it depicts."

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Enchanting Prose

"The narrative unfolds with exquisite prose, seamlessly guiding your thoughts into a realm of mystery. The characters are intricately portrayed, and despite their complexity, the progression of their journey in each chapter captivates you, leaving you eagerly anticipating the unfolding events. The writer's skill is truly remarkable, creating a mesmerizing flow that leaves you yearning for more. I am definitely planning to immerse myself in a binge-read session to savor every moment of this literary gem!"

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