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A tall man stood over the fountain, swinging an axe in both hands. With his first blow he smashed the marble birds. With his second and third blows, he broke the bars of the marble cage. The water gushed on as before, but now there was no cage to contain it, and no birds to fly the rising wave. Fragments of delecate marble littered the floor, along with shards of broken glass and blood.
First you destroy-
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Shelby2711: Ich habe die Story in einem Rutsch durchgelesen. Sie war mega spannend, lustig und bewegte mich auch sehr durch die familiären Neukonstruktionen, sag' ich Mal jetzt so. Wirklich gut geschrieben. Ich mag die Charaktere und was mir aufgefallen ist, dass ich an keiner Stelle das Empfinden hatte, dass e...
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TMarc: i love how a lone man fell in love with an orphaned woman . i love the story !
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sarah: Only thing i found hard with this story was that she was working for fbi then became mafia kings woman. Even so still great story
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anico: Die Geschichte ist angenehm und sanft geschrieben. Bisher interessant und recht spannend.
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Deepika: A nice work without so much exaggeration.. very heartfelt. But I expected Jessica would do more. But it got end without any drama.
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