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Let Me In

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Summary

Boy asking girl to remove her walls

Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
5.0 1 review
Age Rating
13+

Let Me In

Beneath the canvas of a moonlit night,

A boy steps into the soft glow of starlight.

With a heart open, words sincere,

He seeks to quell the shadows of her deepest fear.


"Believe in me," he softly utters,

As the universe listens, the night it flutters.

His plea, a melody in the quiet air,

A tender invitation for her heart to bear.


In the simplicity of a shared gaze,

He promises solace through life's maze.

Not asking for perfection, just a chance,

To dance with her in life's intricate dance.


"Let me in," he whispers low,

A vow to be her refuge in joy or woe.

To catch the tears that silently fall,

And mend the wounds that hurt her soul.


With courage trembling, he takes a stand,

A humble offering, an outstretched hand.

"Share your burdens," his voice aligns,

"In this connection, let your sorrows be mine."


Imperfect and genuine, his love extends,

A tapestry woven with threads that mend.

In the symphony of vulnerability, they intertwine,

A boy's heartfelt wish, a connection divine.

Let Jason Mathew Bryant know what you thought about this chapter!
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Love this

Funny

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Funny

Spicy

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Spicy

Suspenseful

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Suspenseful

Emotional

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Emotional

Profound

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Profound

Heartwarming

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Heartwarming

Shocking

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Shocking

Good Writing

5

Good Writing

Compelling Plot

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Compelling Plot

Great Character

3

Great Character

Strong Dialog

3

Strong Dialog

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"Not asking for perfection, just a chance." This was a good line. I believe everyone has had this moment. Good job. 

3 years

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