What is your opinion?
Actually refreshing!
"I mostly always prefer dark and violent stories but yours was a real freshment. You have a very nice way with your words - there was creativity, you pulled in the character's subjectivity well. I would say for me, it is a little early to give a whole judgement, given that there's only 2 chapters, but I'm actually curious about how it plays out terms of the characteristics and the current situation. The prologue did confuse me a little - there was very few sensory detail so the end of the prologue felt a little misleading. For instance I thought she was assaulted by the boy, or something worse. It took a bit of time for me to completely get the set up in chapter 1 and 2, though Chapter 2 cleared out pretty much one fourth of what I was curious about :)) Other than that, I genuinely see good potential. And I'm excited to read this to the end! Great Job :D"
Intrigued
"So far, I don't understand what is going on at all, but I am intrigued. I hope that the characters are going to unfold soon. Otherwise, it is going to be tough to read. "
