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The Moonlight Ritual

"Quite the ending. The way it ended with what looked like a ritual was something out of a horror story."

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A good start for short horror fiction!

"The Moonlight Ritual by ShackleSoul As a fan of short and straight to the point fiction, I was not disappointed at all. Though, to respect readers one shouldn't impair readability, albeit it DOES make sense in the final of this story. Many toyed with a Ouija board, as I myself wrote something in that league, ago. More of us had to endure horror movies always repeating that old cliche (dumb, dopehead, and ill-prepared dabbles into the Occult). Here, we get better quality! Shackle Soul has a fluent writing style, and neither format, nor grammar, were too spoiled to enjoy reading. The story seems simple, deceptively simple, until the Final makes us readers realize the truth. Or, some of it, a sequel would be possible. Checking the author profile: I hope for both, the author continuing AND the author packing all the stories into a collection, or anthology, for sale. Worthy, time-efficient reading!"

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