The Haunted Park by me at Inkitt
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The haunted park

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Summary

Three friends returned from a 20-day adventure in Abu Dhabi and Oman, noticing an unusual quietness in their childhood park. The security guard shared that strange happenings, like ghosts and moving swings, had led to complaints. Concerned about the park closing and the security guard losing his job, the friends hatched a plan to visit during off-hours and enjoy their favorite activities. Despite their successful sneaking and picnic, an unexpected encounter at the 'giraffe neck slide' left a cliffhanger as the narrator felt a hand on their shoulder during the exit.

Genre
Horror/Mystery
Author
me
Status
Complete
Chapters
9
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1

My 3 friends and I were going back home from a 20 days adventure .We traveled to Abu Dhabi and stayed there for 10 days and then to Oman, Salalah and stayed there for 10 days too. We passed from our child hood park which we still go to for some picnics .But there was something unusual about it .Every time there were many kids playing, running, shouting and more. There was no one around .It wasn't as lively as it used to be, not even the streets .We were so curious that the next day we all woke up and went to the security to ask what had happened .He replied with a sad face "We have been noticing some weird changes .All the people have been complaining about really weird stuff like ghosts and swings moving by itself ".One of my friend named Anaya commented "That's weird! We go here every time and it has been 10 years .We faced nothing like this type of problems". Rida my other friend replied "Yeah! She is right, we never went through this in 10 years". The security guard who knew us from a very long time, ever since we came it this park he treated us like his own daughters told us that if the park shuts down because of this problem he might lose his job.

On hearing this we all were sad because we didn't want our favorite security guard to leave us .So we came up with a plan but we failed .After 5 months no one still went so in the 5 months we had planned for our plan b .Our plan starts now .We sneaked in the park at 8:00 since at that point of time the park is closed and the people around the park went for the work and security didn't arrive .We went to have one of our picnics.

Every thing was going great. Till 8:30 we settled down all our stuff and by 8:45 we had our break fast. At exact 9:00 we started to play board games we brought and then we went to the adults area over there were really long slides. The longest slide was known as the 'giraffe neck slide'. My friends and I a were really interested and went there.

After playing we went to have our lunch. For lunch we had our favorite sandwich's we packed. After playing a little more it was time for dinner. We sat down for dinner at 10:00 by 10:30 we finished dinner and started to pack so we could leave for home. We still went to play. We left at 11 and came back at 11:30. We were heading for the gate. On our way out I felt a hand on my shoulder. I turned back to see............

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