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Loved it!

"I really loved this book! Great plot, well crafted characters and the author has a really distinctive style. Lots of word play. I did feel as if I'd missed an earlier book as I didn't understand some of the terminology of the world the book was set in. Loved it though!"

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Guarded Love

"I didn't understand what was said half of the time, but it doesn't matter. IT WAS AMAZING!!! The plot, the characters, the development, EVERYTHING. I love it."

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Guarded love

"I love this book I enjoyed reading it I recommend this book you won't regret reading 😍"

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Guarded Love

"Totally awesome story!; As in can't put your phone down fascinating, love and mystery! Really pray you are selling on Amazon or your own U Tube channel ! 💗&🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻s ! God bless"

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Guarded love

"Great wonderful story I think you need to write another story with more magic in it you slid a lot of modern slang with this story still not sure about but a good read"

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Guarded love

"This book just got better and better the more you read really enjoyed"

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Love it

"Great story"

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Love it

"Great story"

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loving it

"This is wont of the most amazing stories I've ever heard"

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Very funny and beautiful! LOL!

"I love that you used a drawing with your story. Please just bookmark www.grammarche)ck.com. It helps me. :)"

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So Happy!

"I loved it. As I'm sure I've mentioned about a million times, Alistair is my FAVORITE! I just love seeing him get a happily ever after. *applause* and thank you for a thoroughly enjoyable read!"

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Guarded Love

"omg!!!!I love this book!!!❤❤❤❤❤ Since 8 have started reading it I have not been able to put it down....it is well written too. Must say I did not like the ending however each to their own..."

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Guarded Love

"waah really really good story"

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Guarded Love

"yes I also read the story on w3bnvl. the story is indeed good, not inferior to this story"

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Guarded Love

"this story is like the monster integration story that I read on w3bnvl and there are many other good stories"

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Guarded Love

"I will recomend this story to my friends"

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Guarded Love

"Amazing story"

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