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Where’s everyone?
I’ve tried to excel
And no one cares.
They said
Time will tell.
I got less support than
A one star motel.
Friends tried to sell
The idea that they cared.
I guess they became personnel.
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I encountered the darkest period of my life thus far on my own, in my own head. During that time frame, these were my thoughts.
Where’s everyone?
I’ve tried to excel
And no one cares.
They said
Time will tell.
I got less support than
A one star motel.
Friends tried to sell
The idea that they cared.
I guess they became personnel.
Love this
Funny
Spicy
Suspenseful
Emotional
Profound
Heartwarming
Shocking
Good Writing
Compelling Plot
Great Character
Strong Dialog
The emotions were so raw and vivid that they leaped off the page, engulfing the reader in a whirlwind of intensity.
"I got less support than a one star motel" woww! That comparison just hits home. Love the way in a short poem you manage to speak to the readers' emotions.
I have tried to excel and no one cares, that hit hard.