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Where’s everyone?
I’ve tried to excel
And no one cares.
They said
Time will tell.
I got less support than
A one star motel.
Friends tried to sell
The idea that they cared.
I guess they became personnel.


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I encountered the darkest period of my life thus far on my own, in my own head. During that time frame, these were my thoughts.
Where’s everyone?
I’ve tried to excel
And no one cares.
They said
Time will tell.
I got less support than
A one star motel.
Friends tried to sell
The idea that they cared.
I guess they became personnel.
Let Jarrius "Dezmin" know what you thought about this chapter!
The emotions were so raw and vivid that they leaped off the page, engulfing the reader in a whirlwind of intensity.
"I got less support than a one star motel" woww! That comparison just hits home. Love the way in a short poem you manage to speak to the readers' emotions.
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angelamohamed185: What is not to like? The characters are strong, likeable and real. The story is heartwarming. The quality of the writing is excellent, for which I am truly grateful. Great author. More please.
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readingtoday77: This story is so very sweet. I really like each main character's emotional evolution, especially Liam working through difficult past betrayal and tragedy to be able to take a chance and love again. The sex scenes were fiery and tender and so very moving, especially the scene when Maeve says that she...
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Merrell Bunting: BE Hamel is always worth reading! Strong characters who don’t act stupidly and a good plot. Worth the time!
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vivcarroll: Good story line looking forward to find out the rest of what’s going to happen
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