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On My Own

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Summary

I encountered the darkest period of my life thus far on my own, in my own head. During that time frame, these were my thoughts.

Status
Complete
Chapters
37
Rating
5.0 3 reviews
Age Rating
16+

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Where’s everyone?


I’ve tried to excel

And no one cares.


They said

Time will tell.


I got less support than

A one star motel.

Friends tried to sell

The idea that they cared.


I guess they became personnel.

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The emotions were so raw and vivid that they leaped off the page, engulfing the reader in a whirlwind of intensity.

3 years
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author

"I got less support than a one star motel" woww! That comparison just hits home. Love the way in a short poem you manage to speak to the readers' emotions.

2 years
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I have tried to excel and no one cares, that hit hard.

2 years
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