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When Death Takes Over.

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Summary

Ever see a dying flower and compare it to a lonely soul? Or ever see a dead animal and a flow of sadness takes over you? Well... it's easy for Death to take over... One boy, with his whole life ahead of him, wasted it in a single second. Jacob Harrington was curious about everything around him and when Death came to his aid, he wished he could have rejected his hand.

Genre
Mystery
Author
BW
Status
Complete
Chapters
3
Rating
5.0 (2 reviews)
Age Rating
18+

Chapter 1: The Garage.

The door of the abandoned garage creeks open slowly and I walk inside. The room is dusty and I pinch my nose to hold back every sneeze. I peer around everything and look for a light switch. Boxes and tins and shelves, what else is there? After a few minutes, I find the switch and the whole room fills with light.

I glance at everything through the mists of flying dust. I have never been here before and to tell you the truth, I shouldn't be here.

The boxes looked interesting yes, but I was interested in seeing what was hidden in them. I ripped the boxes, tore out the paper and styrofoam and searched. I found books, bags, hats, shoes, rackets, antique yet perfectly wrapped vases and miniature sculptures, nothing of particular interest to me. But I did find a nice glass unicorn...

I looked out the side window in the garage towards the house, thinking " who lived in that house ". Some people said the house was haunted. I finished my search after I was done looking at an old bicycle, with the rusted steering wheel and pedals, I guessed it was a boys bike. The color had faded and chipped off and the only way, that I knew of, to tell if it's a girls bike is it would have tassels on the handlebars. I walked towards the side door, which lead outside, and struggled to open it. The hinges rusted and old, I then walked across a long path outside to the house and looked at the front door. I didn't believe what people told me about the house so I wasn't scared. It was open slightly, which was creepy and I thought someone broke in or actually lived in here, but I didn't care and so I walked inside.

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what does he see when he enters the house?? will all the rumours be true of it being haunted? will he see paranormal brings? or will it all be nothing? waiting to know further!!

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