La Tumba De La Inocencia by Jabake at Inkitt
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La tumba de la inocencia

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Summary

Niños perdiendo su inocencia por la aberracion humana

Status
Complete
Chapters
3
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Akiko

vivia con mi madre y mi padre, tenia una hermana de 5 años y yo un chico de 15 en la epoca de 1940 en Japon.

estaba tranquilo jugando con mi hermana llamada Akiko, cuando a mi padre le llega una correspondencia, era para que fuera ala guerra contra Estados Unidos mi madre le pidio que no fuera, pero el con el corazon partido sabia que le pasaria si no iba, pasaron 2 meses, cuando escucho unos sumbidos.¡Eran bombas! le avise a mi madre, me dijo que cojiera a Akiko y corriera a un bunker mientras ella se quedava recogiendo suministros.

Llegue al refugio, cuando pasaron las bombas fuy donde estaba mi madre ,no la encontre fuy ala enfermeria.., y hay estaba quemada por las bombas con sus ultimas palabras me dijo que protegiera a Akiko ya que ella tenia una vida por delante y que yo fuera su padre mientras el mio volvia, y haci termino en muriendo alfrente mio

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