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Good read

"The narrator is hilarious, I like how the wrote the story kinda reminds me of the princess bride in a way"

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Enchanting Fun

"As with all her other work, this story is once again well thought out and filled with details that give it a sense of reality despite it being a fantasy. I have fallen in love with the witty, quirky, mouthy bunch of adorable characters while they draw me into a highly imaginative world where I never know what will be around the next turn. I love this story! Roxy's incredibly witty, tongue-in-cheek narrative - with hilarious attention to usually mundane details like town names - sparkles with life. I cannot wait to read what will happen to the unlikely heroes next. They've caused me to care about them!!!🧡"

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Brilliant and so much fun

"I love the concept, the characters and the story art. The characters and plot reminds me a bit of Fable which I love. The story is adventurous, funny and has just the right amount of naughty. Delain is such an awesome character. I can't wait for the rest of the story. "

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Steampunk Hero’s

"Great storyline. Interesting cast of characters. More please?!"

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