28 chapters read

"I liked the plot, the characters and the story arc. What got me off track was the grammar. Please edit it so the story flows perfectly."

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27 chapters read

"I think they're both duh characters but it's an addictive read"

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28 chapters read

"It was a good story. There was too much cursing. Why couldn’t they talk without all the profanity. "

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