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Grammar and punctuation

"Sometimes grammar and punctuation or editing, not sure which is the cause, is so poor, it’s seems like it’s a translation to English. For most part, it’s fine but can be distracting and some of it needs to be reread constantly to figure out what was intended."

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Can’t put down

"Story has a quick pace and keeps you wanting more. Good story build up before it gets steamy. Good balance of story and steam, not just steam. Solid story line. "

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Very captivating!

"I really loved this book! I started it on an ad and had to subscribe to finish it. The flow of the book and the use of each character’s pov flowed so well in my opinion. It kept me hooked the whole time, so much so that I finished in 2 days! 10/10 recommend!"

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Worth every penny!

"I chose this rating because I like the flow of the book and the well thought out plot. It reads like someone with ptsd but not a full focus on only the ptsd. It also shows realistic growth. I would recommend this book to anyone who wants to read a spicy book about three alphas pampering and protecting their omega. "

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Really good

"Great book so far really enjoying it "

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Captivating

"I liked the plot of the story. The alpha characters are well rounded and described immaculately, sticking to the same temperament while also having a softer side as is typical of a man in love. I tend to have highs and lows with the omega characters mostly because their temperament is always chaotic. Sometimes they appear fierce and formidable and then they become meek and inconsolable. This juxposition can frustrate me with these types of characters. "

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Great read

"Great, loved it, hated they way Daisy was treated by her family. Loved how the 3 Alphas loved on her. Wish their was a little more. Didn't like the ending, so many open questions left"

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Suspense and Spicy

"The ending could’ve had more. Loved the storyline and the characters were amazing. There was a couple grammatical errors. Just wished there was more chapters to the story than what was given "

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Claiming their omega

"It's was a really wonderful story."

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Omega

"I absolutely loved this story. Couldn't put it down! I would love to read a sequel. Is there one? Please say there is! Thank you so much for making this story! 🩵 💚 💙 ❤️ 🌹 "

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Enjoyable read!

"I really enjoyed the book and the love that blossomed between the characters. The plot was pretty easy to follow and I liked the distinct personalities of the main characters. From a more critical perspective, I think there was some unnecessary repetition of phrases (eg sucking in a breath) and plot lines (getting kidnapped & the flip-flopping between confidence & insecurity), and a few grammar errors (that fellow readers have commented), but overall I’d be keen to see a sequel, and, selfishly, some more smut! Thanks for a very enjoyable read :)"

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Soooo gut! Hab‘s in einem Tag gelesen. Ja, hätte länger sein können. Aber ansonsten liebe ich alles was daran.

"Story gut. Nichts was mich in ein Trauma stürzen würde, weil mich das Leid anderen anmacht. Hasse das nämlich. ML alle Green flags. Love it. "

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Fantastic Story

"I absolutely loved this story, equal parts plot and spice and it flowed quite well. Would really love 2 or 3 more chapters though, or even a time jump chapter (which I usually don’t enjoy but would love here). I love the characters and their development so well so I really want to see just a bit more about them settling into life as a pack, maybe what happens when Daisy tells them she’s ready to be a mom. Or if she ever spoke to them about her spicy dream? Please please write more with these characters! "

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Claiming their omega

"I love the book I just wish there was more explaining on the alphas past and a second book to read about them "

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Claiming their omega

"Great book bit lots of spellings wrong. Loving the plot though"

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Claiming Their Omega

"Great story! Kept me hooked right up to the end. A few unanswered questions but, overall, a resounding success! "

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Proof reading

"The book needs a good proof reading as there are a few mistakes like word instead of work. And a few others. Otherwise I love the story"

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Claming their omega

"I loved it I just wish it wasn't a cliffhanger over all it was a quick read if your a book junky like me then you'll probably finish it in half a day or sooner like I did "

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Wonderful story line!

"Great story with just the right amount of action and spice!"

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Good

"The plot is amazing im addicted to the book. The only thing bothering me is the grammer. Somethings didn't make sense so I had to kind of improvise to make it make sence in my head."

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