Prologue
I was just a babe when I was found. Drenched in blood, he told me. Surrounded by nothing but jungle. He said I was left for dead in that storm, wrapped in palm leaves to shelter my tiny, fragile body from the cold. He tells me to be grateful that he didn’t leave me there to be taken by the beasts that live within it.
He promised he would never harm me, that he would protect me. Twenty years have passed since that day, and I am no longer that weak, defenseless fairy who believed in false promises.
In the first sentence, it should be spelled "baby" unless you meant to put babe. I don't mean to be rude by pointing that out, just trying to help out. I do apologize if I misinterpreted it though.
Such a good start! I think the blurb of the book spoils too much though! You have a nice cover and the concept is already interesting enought by itself: 'fairy daughter of pirate king raised to obey his commands sent in the jungle for a dangerous mission and she gets kidnapped'.So my suggestion is to diminish the blurb that reveals the plot as I would have found more interesting to discover about it later :)