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Great read can't wait for the next chaptcant put my phone down to read what happens neplase keep writing xter.

"There's nothing to dislike about this story ,have told a couple of friends to download inset "

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The Headmasters Flame.

" i loved the story so far very erotic and steamy in parts but so erotic there made for each other. I hope there is more soon you're a brilliant writer .cant wait for more .xx thankyou for the book xx "

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Witty and sexy, I'm hooked.....

"Read most of it on the book's website. Some chapters are quite long, but as the plot hots up, I'm getting anxious to know what's going to happen after every cliffhanger... It's like being addicted to a drama series LOL. Neill's dialogue is the best, IMO"

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The writing is just superb

"Raunchy and real! I feel like I am watching a film when I read a chapter of The Headmaster's Flame... the attention to all the senses is amazing... I discovered the book here on Inkitt, and went to read most of the book on the author's own website, and came back here to review. Please keep writing... I am anxious to know what will happen to the forbidden love between Neill and Natalia... I am gunning for them! "

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Sophisticated, erotic and hilarious!

"I read most of the book on the author's own website. Sophisticated, erotic and hilarious! I never knew a book could be all those 3 things at once! I love this author's style of writing and the suspense she builds with every chapter. It is constantly entertaining and yet the plot drives strong from one cliffhanger to the next. I love the detail, and how she describes the female MC's inner feelings so vividly as her sexuality awakens. I love that Natalia isn't just a passenger of Neill's alpha naughtiness but she is a force to be reckoned with! I can't wait to see how this story unwinds!"

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Gorgeously deep and erotic

"Aaand spicy, AND funny, and absolutely outrageous... and thanks for setting it in Britain. I've never read anything like The Headmaster's Flame! Quality and pure class!"

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tout simplement parfait

"Ohhh the French lesson .. absolute perfection, perfect foreplay, perfect follow up to the bananas and absolutely what I needed from Neill too before they did the deed. Magic 💫"

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Amazing read

"My heart flutters waiting for the new chapter. I regret reading it too fast now i have to wait 😅"

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The Headmaster's Flame

"Love this story! You are a gifted storyteller. I agree; while totally understandable, the wait between updates is excruciating. I find myself rereading chapters just to get my fix of these characters. Thank you for sharing your talent. "

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The professor's flame

"I like the author's style of writing. It leaves me curious wanting to know what will happen next. I love this book and look forward to reading the next chapters"

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It never disappoints 🌶️🔥

"Another fantastic chapter! I can’t get enough for these two and can’t wait to see where the story goes!! 🫶🏻🔥"

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Headmasters flame

"You write incredibly well. The dialogue is brilliant - so witty, thoughtful and funny. I was a bit dubious about the age gap, but I’ve really enjoyed the journey of their relationship. I’m hoping that they will end making this work somehow long term. They are such a great match. Looking forward to reading more 😎"

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Fireworks

"Argh I love this!!! So perfectly written and described and just 💖 "

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Review o'clock 🤭

"A very long smutty read🥰🥰. Me likely😂😂❤️‍🔥"

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Changing the review

"Well, I wrote my first review at about 200 pages when I really loved it - loved the writing style, the word play, the story promised longing for forbidden fruit... I got all of that, but at almost 1400 pages I just have to reevaluate my stars. The writing style is still interesting and unique, the word play is a little less common in the chapters but still really entertaining. However, I guess I'm too prudish for this story. I generally don't mind BDSM, I sometime enjoy dark romance, but here it just rubs me the wrong way. He's grooming her, claiming it's love, but he just enjoys his plaything. He doesn't really care for her or respect her. She doesn't really have the chance to say no. He just pushes her into a situation ignoring her implicit (and in the last chapter explicit) no and when she enjoys herself even if she didn't want it at first, they both take it as a proof that it was consensual. I guess if they were closer in age or if she had a chance to leave the situation, I'd be more inclined to see the "love" in that. But she's stuck between a rock and a hard place where she can choose barely surviving with her neglecting mother or being fed and clothed propeply and paying with her body. It's been a while since I read the blurb and trigger warnings at the beginning of the book, but I doubt there are any regarding grooming and rape, because the description of their intercourse certainly feels like one (and with Joan too). But again, maybe I'm just too prudish..."

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