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Sheila Chasteen: Thank for this beautiful story of love, family and devotion .I loved all of the different characters. You brought them all to life. I hated to see it end. Maybe there will be a part 2??I would love to know what happens next. 💕💕💕

Mokatoka: Say what????? God! Is it over???

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Mary Wilkins: This was an enjoyable short story. Well done! 😄👏🏾👏🏾

Kelley: Love the story line! Ryder needs to getvhiavhead out of his ass tho!

Nyssa: Great read!

Danielle: Great writing

jo987_123: This is a good story, but it needs a good editor to go through this iteration and fix the mistakes. The pov changes from 1st person to 3rd person, often, and sometimes within one sentence. It needs a liberal sprinkling of punctuation marks throughout, and a decision needs to be made about the char...

E: I like it but the style is just a little too disjointed. The short snippet sentences work in certain moments, but there are so many that it doesn't feel like it's flowing as well as it could be. I really like the plot and plan to continue. That is just meant as a little form of feedback. Thanks for ...