57 chapters read
"This novel was a great love story. I found myself getting mad at times wondering if AMA & Talan would get back together. I’m so glad they did And really thanks to her brother Eric At times this book bought me back to my teenage days I loved this story "
19 chapters read
"Since I’ve gotten to know the characters, I’ve been hooked on this story. Because of all the twist, it’s a real page turner. The author depicts believable situations between teenagers and events they encounter. I could see the characters growing with each chapter. I highly recommend this story to anyone, especially romance lovers. "
0 chapters read
"I started reading this story today and it is a great story so far! I am hooked and I can't wait to learn more about the characters!! "
6 chapters read
"The story telling skills of the author are on a whole different level. I enjoyed how cute the characters behave and how accurate their depictions are for teenage age kids behaviors. The way the POV's are expressed on the book is incredible and to keep track of so many characters is just masterful! I will keep an eye for future chapters... can wait for "Talma" love story develops fully...! "
7 chapters read
"The title basically says it all 😌💕 I am a sucker for childhood sweetheart, you know, crushing on him since they were kids/young, and this story has it all ♡ This kind of story about crushing on big brother's bestfriend has already used a lot but it never gets old and this story has its own uniqueness! First thing first, I honestly am IMPRESSED with the author's skills to write 4 POV in total without making them sound like each other. Each voice has their own character and story and I love that the author master the skills to go back and forth between current moment and the past very skillfully. Every character has their reason for doing something, like why Jaxon is so overprotective, and why Talan keeps himself, and how Kade develops his feeling, and how Amalia feels toward all of them. It was narrated beautifully and logically I feel like I am so absorbed to the story to the point that each character feels so real to me💕 I feel for them all and I want them all to be happy 🙈 Please make my baby Kade happy too author💜💙🩵 If you like romance, mainly about friendship to lovers and also a young adult story, you GOTTA give it a go! I mean it! The writing, the narrative, the plot, it is all engaging and I just crave for more ♡ look forward to the next chapters. Be kind to my heart please dont make it heartbreaking for Amalia lol Wonderful author!💫💫💫💫💫"
0 chapters read
"I like the characterization for the characters! I also like the different POVs. Makes me root for the characters, along with wanting them to succeed. Can't wait for future chapters!"
7 chapters read
"Great story loving this so far"
5 chapters read
"I'll start with the negative since I know I'm mainly going to be writing praise here. There are some points where it is hard to follow the past/present changings. But maybe I'm just challenged. Also, I did see some grammar errors, but nothing too bad. Now into my rant about my great love for this story. OBSESSED. OBSESSED. OBSESSED. Your characterization is PHENOMENAL. It is super easy to immediately fall in love with each character. I love how you do different POVs to allow us to hear different character's thoughts. Also, you write them as their age! Which is amazing. They sound like teenagers, act like teenagers, and their behavior and thoughts are on point. I remember being just like this at that age. It's also super understandable, realistic, and relatable. The plot is amazing, and I love that while it seems like I may know the direction it's going, I still feel drawn to wanting to read more and see more and see where this will go. I'm rooting for the main characters SO hard. Just absolutely in love. I need to figure out how to ensure I get updates on this story, because I'll absolutely continue to read it. Constructive criticism: I'd say just read through your chapters out loud and you'll easily find the parts I'm referring to with grammar issues. You seem like a great writer; you'll be able to find them. While writing, we all kind of miss those little errors sometimes. It's perfectly normal. But thank you for posting this story, it's really wonderful. And I'm happy I get to continue following it. "
0 chapters read
"I liked it but I can't believe it end there just like that I want to know how it goes between Amalia and Taran and Taran and Kade please "
2 chapters read
"I really enjoyed the second chapter. Although the Twilight series isn't my cup of tea, I admire the plot and the characters and your writing resembles that skill level. I love the way this is written. There are a few areas where I felt that there could have been better word choices. But that's me personally and sometimes I'm just a word snob. But I did feel that certain areas could use a little more sparkle ^-^ overall I loved your work and I cant wait to read more!"