Love or loyalty book: 2

"This time it's more good!. But you just need to organize what happen next and think it through more. From what I see you kind of just write what you think of this second without thinking about it too much. But anyway. It was cool!. But the first volume was more of a laughable since Kevin was more provocative than here. Meanwhile the presence of her brother does make the story more serious than before. But that too is the good thing!. "