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Tears In The Crowds

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The poem "Tears in the Crowds" delves into a variety of dark and thought-provoking themes, expressing a sense of despair and concern about the state of the world and human society. The poet touches on topics such as corrupt leadership, genetic manipulation, addiction, death, ancient myths, and philosophical struggles. The poem reflects on the pain and suffering present in society, the destructive impact of human actions on the environment, and the lack of meaningful solutions. The poet emphasizes the need for empathy and compassion, urging readers to recognize the importance of addressing societal issues and finding collective solutions. The poem calls for a brighter perspective and a focus on what is truly valuable in life to avoid succumbing to fear and apathy. Overall, the poem's tone is contemplative, melancholic, and critical of the darker aspects of human existence, encouraging readers to consider their roles in creating a more compassionate and sustainable world. Review and Summary 2 Review and Summary "Tears in the Crowds" is a thought-provoking and emotionally charged poem that delves into a range of societal and personal reflections. Structured in a series of concise stanzas, the poem paints a vivid picture of contemporary issues and human experiences, from corruption and oppression to personal struggles and environmental concerns, among other details.

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Complete
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Age Rating
13+

Tears In Crowds (POEM)

Tears in the Crowds


A tyrant on a corrupt throne

A sheep about to become a genetic clone

A weary traveller far away from home

A heroin addict on methadone


Graveyards of peace and quiet lament

An ungrateful niece,

Dead bodies in cement

The Biblical Golden Fleece

Friedrick Nietzsche’s torment


We look to each other for strength through the terrain

Some don’t stop to bother when saturated in pain

Like volcanic ash clouds pouring out acid rain

And satanic slash crowds worshipping the insane


I’ll refrain from the point of the story today

With this unintentional darkness so much on display

It’s all about whether you walk the right path the right way

And consider whatever you have to then say


The innocence of childhood refusing to let it go

The recompense of wildwoods as the oldest trees cease to grow

It’s like falling down onto your knees in the pure white snow

And begging for somebody please to tell you where life needs to flow


There’s an angry mob waiting with torches and rakes

And a whole culture of people who make money from being fakes

I could find it quite funny if it weren’t such a terrible mistake

As the day grows less sunny and night begins to break


We wonder this planet just looking for conquests

And plunder this environment in hideous contests

For oil and copper and carbon and gas contents

No wonder the atmosphere has decided to energetically vent


I cannot condone this apathetic approach

To nuclear war keeping alive a cockroach

A subject one wouldn’t even dare to even broach

Is open for discussion when riding in coach


There’s no obvious mechanism for systemic solution

Nor any long term strategy to cut back on pollution

While governments create catastrophe and generate more confusion

The wealthy are eating for free while the poor collide in confusion


There’s legitimate acts of war crimes and genocide

While they distort the facts and cover up what they can hide

Whatever statement retracts , it’s like sniffing fermaldahyde

On the day that your mother and father have died


It’s reality that’s gripping me

I’m not being intentionally depressing

It’s the entropy of the Ignomy, an adult psychologically regressing

All the while the emergency is continually pressing

So close to uncertainty as the criminal is confessing


So send me a blessing while I’m out convalescing

And looking for wounds that need tenderly dressing

Just as hearts need the soft touch of gentle caressing

It’s the collective willpower I’m damn well contesting


So brighten up the perspective lest you drown yourself in fear

And lighten up the corrective concepts that draw near

And hold on to what you have known to hold dear

Because the crowds and the masses are breaking down in tears


Copyright 2023 Elizabeth Moroz

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