What is your opinion?
Realistic and Detailed
"I can not express how much I loved your writing style, so detailed and unlike anything I have read in a long time! Your describing is in a way that makes me visualize everything you are trying to put across, very strong!! From what I have read this is a very intriguing story and it is clear that this book has massive potential, I can't wait to keep reading!! I enjoyed reading this!!!"
Fabulous Beginning!
"You are so incredibly talented! The way you weave the descriptions of the things the characters are seeing and experiencing with the amazing dialog, is perfection! You immediately pulled me in and I am so excited to keep reading the chapters as you post them. I honestly don't know how you don't have more people reading your book, it is so good! Keep up the fantastic work!"
GREAT BEGINNING!
"Actually, I am shocked. Why this book does not have more readers?! To me the aithors seems like she has practiced writing all her life or she just has such an amazing talent cause guys!! The writing here is awesome! I literally feel the sensations of every fantasy element--great world building, rich details and set up, great characters, and great story-telling. Sometimes I stumble upon a fantasy book but has a less detail story telling, so it does not feel as rich as a fantasy as I'd like, or the opposite, the fantasy is just too focused on world-building that my mind just got switched off in the middle (I swear I love The Hobbit but the descriptive writing there is not my favorite! Sorry JRR TOLKIEN FANS!:() But with this one, the writer can balance both the pace and the story narration with enough description of the world-building the character in. And this story also has great fenale character, so far, I have a feeling she will be a kickass heroine. It really helps cause I enjoy the story more if I like the characters already ♡ Also the author knows how to pull the readers with creating such a great opening. It just instantly pulls you in to know more what happen in the story. Overall, I thorougly enjoyed it! It has been a great reading experience. My review is based on 2 published chapters, and if I can give the author more than 5, I could. It is just that good. Fantasy lovers out there should totally check it out! Dont miss this out srsly!!"


