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Unwanted

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Summary

"Unwanted" - adj: not or no longer desired. There are words that can haunt you and words that can stick to you like glue. For her, "unwanted" is both. This word alone can cause profound harm, replayed like a tape in your head. She felt unwanted by her mother, navigating life to become wanted by someone, only to find them and lose them, feeling unwanted once again...

Genre
Drama
Author
swords
Status
Complete
Chapters
21
Rating
4.9 (8 reviews)
Age Rating
16+

O N E

The morning sun gently filtered through the curtains, casting a warm glow into the bedroom. As the soft light kissed her eyelids, Jane stirred from her slumber, slowly awakening to the beginning of a new day. With a contented sigh, she stretched her limbs and snuggled deeper into the warmth of the bed.

Moments later, the aroma of freshly brewed coffee wafted through the air, accompanied by the sound of footsteps approaching their bedroom. Jane smiled as she heard Harry's familiar voice, carrying a tray laden with breakfast delights.

"Good morning, my love," Harry greeted, setting the tray down on the bedside table. "I brought you breakfast."

Jane's heart swelled with affection as she propped herself up on the pillows, admiring her husband's thoughtful gesture. "You're too good to me, Harry," she said, reaching out to brush a stray lock of hair from his forehead.

Harry grinned, his eyes sparkling with adoration. "Anything for my beautiful wife."

As they enjoyed their breakfast together, engaged in light conversation, discussing plans for the day ahead and reminiscing about cherished memories. Their laughter filled the room, creating an atmosphere of warmth and love.

Just as they were halfway through their meal, the door creaked open, and their three-year-old son, Alex, bounded into the room, his face lit up with excitement.

"Mommy! Daddy!" Alex exclaimed; his tiny arms outstretched. "I want cuddles!"

Jane's heart melted at the sight of her energetic little boy. She opened her arms wide, welcoming him into a warm embrace. "Come here, sweetheart," she said, pulling him close.

Harry joined in their embrace, enveloping them both in his strong embrace. "We love you, buddy," he said, planting a kiss on Alex's cheek.

After a few moments of cuddling, they reluctantly released each other, knowing that they had to start their day. Harry and Jane quickly got ready for work while Alex played with his toys nearby, occasionally chiming in with innocent questions and observations.

Once they were all dressed and ready to go, Harry packed up their belongings, and they headed out the door. Harry dropped Jane and Alex off at the preschool before continuing on to his office.

As the day progressed, Jane immersed herself in her work as a preschool teacher, guiding her young students through various activities and lessons. Despite her focus on her classroom duties, her thoughts occasionally drifted to her own family. She couldn't wait to see her husband, Harry, and their son, Alex, at the end of the day.

Throughout the morning and afternoon, Jane made sure to check in on Alex, who was attending daycare within the preschool. She stole moments during her breaks to peek into the daycare area, where she would catch glimpses of Alex happily playing with his friends. Each time she saw him, her heart swelled with love and pride.

Finally, as the clock struck three, Jane eagerly gathered her belongings, ready to head home. She made her way to the daycare area to pick up Alex, her anticipation growing with each step. The corridors echoed with the laughter of children as they made their way outside, their families picking them up.

As they walked, Jane couldn't help but steal glances at her son, his face illuminated with joy and innocence. She cherished these moments together, knowing how quickly time passed and how precious each memory was.

With Alex safely by her side, Jane headed home, her heart full of love and gratitude for her little family.

Upon their arrival, Jane settled Alex into his favorite spot on the couch, where he happily played with his toys. She busied herself in the kitchen, preparing dinner and a light snack for her son while she waited for Harry to return home.

Minutes turned into hours, and Jane began to grow anxious as she realized that Harry was running late. Just as she was about to call him, her phone rang, and her heart skipped a beat when she saw the caller ID.

"Hello?" Jane answered, her voice trembling with apprehension.

"Mrs. Doe?" a voice on the other end spoke, the tone grave and solemn. "This is Amanda from St. Mary's Hospital. There's been an accident involving your husband, Harry."

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author

Your English is very strong and you have a wonderful vocabulary. The sentences are varied with nice phrases like "Minutes turned to hours" to convey the passage of time. I'm intrested to see how the story develops.

2 years
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author

Nice start! Too often writers start with a similar storyline, the main character losing a loved one or getting hurt, and it happens so quickly that it doesn't have an emotional punch. That's not the case here, great job. :)

2 years
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author

Aw man! I was enjoying their cute little family....welp.

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