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"This was a very good read, though sad in a sense. The story is very good and the plot follows through without you getting lost a million times. The emotions feel real and it's heartbreaking that this is someone's reality. Well done author!"

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"Lovely writing. I see no language barriers. Well edited. The author has expressed so many feelings in this true story of love and pain. My heart reached out to her pain and rejoiced in her victory. Love can make one stronger than you think. Thank you for sharing."

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Unwanted

"Painful and heartbreaking story.What I like is the fact that she survived "

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Unwanted

"It’s a tear jerker so be warned. It make you grateful for the life you have."

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Good

"I honestly wish that Jane just took her son and left rather than allowing him relate with his father. Harry doesn’t remember, only what he has been poisoned with. I don’t know if she still has puppy eyes for him but she better snaps out of it "

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Heart touching story

"Very emotional, and heart touching story. The author has a way with words, and her narrative style is great. I love to see a change in Jane's life. I'm looking forward to a turning point, that makes her strong. Good luck author, keep it up. 👏😍💕"

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THE TESTAMENT OF LOVE

"You heard that lkve conquer everything right? I think that phrase fits this story so much. Oh. My. God. I dare say Jane may be my new favorite character!! She is so positive, strong, loving, caring, polite, and best of all, not one who give up easily despite the shitstorm that wreck her life. Her parents abandoned her, her in laws despised her, and her husband... well you gotta found out yourself but lets say her marriage is in the brink of tethering as well. The plot is gripping and intense and will pull your heartstring very tight. Everything happen just make you realize that life sometimes is so unpredictably uneexpected. When you think something will stay the same--Bam! Crazy thing happens! I am impressed with the author"s skill to craft that in a very engaging and beautiful way, especially since this one (I think) is her first story, but the emotions are palpable and the descriptions are enough to shape the plotline and the narrative itself is so engaging. I devour it pretty quick and I am totally waiting to see what happens next!!! Sam you have done great job! Looking forward to the next update 💕💕"

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Amazing

"Jane's story hooked me to the end. It was realistic and interesting and fun to read. "

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