Chapter Opaque pain | The Opaque Pain Poem By Adekoya Abiodun by Dorobook140 at Inkitt
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THE OPAQUE PAIN POEM BY ADEKOYA ABIODUN

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Summary

The opaque pain is a poem about a lady i pains but people can't notice because of one or two reasons known to her.

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Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
5.0 1 review
Age Rating
16+

Opaque pain

I BURIED MY HEAD IN WATER TO HIDE MY TEARS

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The water i taste

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Feeling of salty it shared

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The flow of hidden tears

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Story of pain it shares.

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Gate of a lot I knocked.

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Through its window I pepped

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Who will deliver thee?

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My teeth shiny in joy

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My heart buried in no joy.

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Someone should see beyond

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Hold me!

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I am too young.

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But water hide it away.

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Holy heaven! I’m insane.

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Only thee that bare the taste.

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Will unbaled the truth say.

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About the heaps of pain

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Hidden in water of play.

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In life, I jump in joy.

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In real I crawl to join

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Strongly my legs are tied.

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mother I called why am I so tight?

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Oh! the invisible string of pain I cried.

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Beneath the smile on mi face

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Lies the heaps of pain.

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The struggle not to fail.

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Come forth fear not to stray.

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For what will human say?

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After showing the pain

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Yet nothing to gain.

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To humans I laugh

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To my mother I cried!

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To my father I lied!

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To my friend I smiled

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To my heart I died

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For the pains are mine

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Nay shall I share my pain.

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Unto people I say

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For the crocodile tears they share

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Mockery powder they rub.

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They want your gain.

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Want not your pain!

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They know your pain they know your weak

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The comfort they give.

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Behind, firm the knife they keep.

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OPAQUE IT IS!

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MY PAIN I KEEP

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