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C--211

"Another great short horror story. The blend of unholy and normal life was written in such a way that the author kept the reader from knowing when things were becoming demonic. The ending was such a twist that shows that people will ignore the most basic warnings for a deal that sounds perfect. "

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C-211

"This was an interesting read. It was a very fast paced book. I would have liked it to slow down just a little and maybe get more information or details on why there were inhabitants in that apartment. What was the purpose? Dean and Robert turned out to be very stubborn in that they stayed a lot longer than I would have in that situation! All in all, I really liked this short story. Thank you for sharing!"

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