-TEASER-
SECOND BOOK: THE HIDDEN LABYRINTH
I look around, seeing a piano, a violin, and some Greek art. I examine the paintings, seeing that they are all different depictions of Poseidon, Hestia, Hera, and Zeus. I found one of Demeter, and one of my mom, Aphrodite- the aesthetics of the painting colorful and dazzling to the eye. Behind all of them is one that looks dark- the black and red paint on the sides being the only thing I can see. I move the painting forward to see that this dark painting depicts Cronus swallowing the Gods and Goddesses whole. He’s depicted as a giant- an army of demons and hellhounds tearing through the Greek gods as Cronus dangles a handful of them, dropping them into his mouth. I shudder at the sight, remembering that I am supposed to face him someday.
I hear the loud POP POP POP of a handgun and a noisy THUMP following afterwards. I jump, the paintings falling onto the ground as I cover my mouth with both hands, staring at the ceiling above me.
Tears fill my eyes again, and I fall to my knees.
ahh, okay I’ve only read the blurb but this is exciting so far! i just wanted to let you know two little typos, just incase you hadn’t noticed them! ‘she doesn’t know about herself.. for now’ great line, but the ellipses isn’t full since there are only two dots. and then also, there’s an extra/ stray letter ‘e’ near the end. nothing big at all, and if it weren’t in the blurb i wouldn’t have mentioned it! i just figured i’d tell you, because i know this story will be great and it would be a shame if people were turned away because of that. anyway, i hope this wasn’t an annoying or out of place comment!
just finished the teaser and this story seems just right for my taste! the flourishes in the writing, the Greek mythology, and the general mature Percy Jackson vibes? I CANNOT WAIT!
Great beginning and great blurb girl!^^ Seeing as Zeus Poseidon Hera is mentioned I miss my younger days when I used to devour PJ series ♡♡♡