What is your opinion?
I like it!
"It has a 'OK' pacing. You will never get bored with reading this authors work. Great Job! "
Eerie!!
"This short story takes a unique and modern approach to stalking. Honestly, I shouldn’t have read this at night. The build up to the final scene was quite intense and made me feel as if there were eyes on my back. If you enjoy short stories and thrillers, I would definitely recommend!"
I needed more!
"This story absolutely blew me away with its brilliant and original plot. The author's mastery of suspense had me on the edge of my seat from start to finish. It was great. But I would have preferred more chapters and longer ones. It would have been interesting to get to know the characters more, their backgrounds, motives, and goals. The writing is overall good, but there's some room for improvement. One thing that stuck out to me was the repetition of certain words. It'd be nice to see a bit more variety in the vocabulary to keep things fresh and interesting for the reader. Overall though, I thoroughly enjoyed this story and would love to see more from this author in the future. Keep up the good work!"
Suspenseful
"Good build-up and an interesting plot. It was an easy read with great characters. :)"
Interesting story
"A great story! It is not easy to build a suspense but you did it in such casual and natural way, I loved it! Keep on doing an amazing work!"
Interesting story
"A great story! It is not easy to build a suspense but you did it in such casual and natural way, I loved it! Keep on doing an amazing work!"
Suspenseful
"Right from the start it was suspenseful and i couldn't wait to find out what would happen, each chapter had some sort of cliff hanger and i was hooked. i really enjoyed this story so far, cant wait to read more!!"
A great example of buildup and payoff
"How far will love, or is it craziness - are they the same thing, take you? Is it just paranoia or is someone really after Nathan? This story is a great example of a great buildup and payoff. Criticism: This is a personal preference thing but I would love to see a deeper dive into Nathan's emotional state and his sense of fear. Great job with the story! "
Very Suspenseful!
"The author does a great job building up the suspense in the story. I like the length of this story too. It is easy to read and I could definitely see additional stories coming out in the future. Great job author!"
Very Enjoyable Overall
"Chills and Thrills: Ex For a Reason takes a unique approach in its story, capitalizing on the fear evoked by the sense of being stalked. The story’s buildup is incredible, and it handles the suspense and tension incredibly well. However, the climax felt underwhelming and rushed; the main character didn’t do much to help himself, and it gets resolved too easily. Moreover, Olivia’s ulterior motives weren’t handled in the best way, making it sound stupid rather than creepy. Overall, despite its flawed ending, this installment of Chills and Thrills is an enjoyable read and a great addition to the series. "
