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En un passage éclair j'inonde les cratères et complète la lune. A défaut de pouvoir dénombrer mes défauts, on chemine vers le vrai pour le discerner du faux. A la croisée des destins je continue d'errer sous une canicule, inquiet quand je réfléchis moins seul, arrogant une fois les deux pieds hors sol. Les ombres s'allument diurnes, les lumières s'éteignent nocturnes; touche mon coeur ça sature, touche ma plume ça satyre. DIGITAL RED BOY ✖️ KYLE XYZ ✖️ SHARKEY.D.BEE W022-31 © 1445/2024, DEL5. X 696. CREW.
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Mimie: I like the plot. I don't finish yet but this is an original story
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svara_narasiah: Hello :)First off, I'd like to say that I love the plot of this book; it's wonderfully original and draws the reader in almost immediately. I also love the poetry/descriptive aspects of this book, and the love letters throughout are also well-written. Good job!I did notice a lot of punctuation/gramm...
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Kyle: Love it in all honesty. Slightly longer than I had assumed but it’s great. There’s just some conflicting words used in the story.
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gettexh21: Hello! I’m Falica, a webtoon/manga artist excited by strong storytelling.If you need a comic version of your story, I can make that happen affordably!Discord: falica_spicer82Instagram: falanzero5
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Sienna Hayes : Hi, I’m Sienna! I read your story and I really liked it. While reading it, I was already imagining the scenes as visuals in my mind. I would love to adapt your story into comic art. I’m really passionate about creating comics, especially adapting stories into visual form. Your story could look amazi...
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Miriam0011: It was a pleasure reading and analyzing your writing you’re doing fantastic work. It’s always motivating to see such creativity. Are you working on a story these days?
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Saraa: I really admire how unique your plot is. It didn't feel predictable at all. Did you always know how the story would end, or did the ending change while you were writing?
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