The Perfect Find by Atlegang at Inkitt
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The perfect find

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Summary

Love at first sight, The story is about a girl who fell in love with the man he met in the woods & how she opened up for him.is true when they say love conquers all

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
3
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1

It was Wednesday night when i saw a walking dead man && the man was buried last week Sunday . Saying i was scared it's understatement. I stopped && watched then man the man crossing the road peacefully.At that time i needed to be rescued i needed to leave the place.After a few minutes i heard a knock on my window at first i was scared but i opened the window it was a white guy with blue eyes he asked what i'm doing lam i in trouble or something i said no ( cell phone rings)

Me:nosipho speaking how can i help you (ohh it was the white guy I met today & his name is jayden)

Jay: hi nosi it's jay you good

Me:yeah yeah you (guys his voice was something else)

Jay: i'm good i was wondering if we could meet for coffee sometime

Me: of course why not place, date && time

Jay: that's not the kinda answer i was waiting for

Me: hau what answer are you waiting for who do you take me for kahle kahle ( with a soft laugh)

Jay : i thought you would say no && asked me where did i get your number

Me: vele we did you get my numbers

Jay : yesterday when we were talking i took your business card

Me: cheesy

Jay:so cheesy goodnight

Me: night jay

(We ended the call)

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