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"Unfortunately there are punctuation and spelling mistakes, and a couple regarding dialogue that might confuse readers. Not to fret, it's only a couple that's no issue at all. On the topic of dialogue, I definitely liked how the characters interact with one another, whether if they are of significance or not. There's the occasional witty remark, and personality shining through every speech! It's quite the kill the author has for this book, not to mention the good observations within description; while not otherwise creative in turn of phrases but rationally blunt that sets a straightforward tone. In all, I'd have loved to read so much more on this story and will be waiting for chapter updates patiently. Least to say, I can't give a full review yet considering the little amount of chapters but this really has potential! "

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