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Dark and Twisted

"3 immortals and one human. Little did they know when condemning this child they would love her and in the end condemn themselves. This was way darker than I usually read but there is no denying you are a talented writer. Although this girl needs her HEA. "

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The Cost of Immortal Love

"I really enjoyed the plot and the twists and turns. I loved the ending, although I can understand why most wouldn’t. However, for it to be sci-fi, the descriptions of the magic elements were a little confusing. Also, with there being so many characters, it can be confusing which one the author is referring to or who is even speaking at the moment. I had to reread things sometimes to make it clear who was the subject. "

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