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The Carousel

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Summary

A 13 year old girl enters a ride. The carousel a guy makes a joke about how she’s to old to ride a older man overhears he gets angry and well. Read to find out how the happiest place on earth the lemony park on berry avenue turns to the deadliest. (Hi I’m ariella Torres a 13 year old small writer please don’t judge I’m pretty new to this app I’ve been writing for a while now. I dream to become a writer.)

Status
2yrs ago
Chapters
3
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Characters

Autumn 13 years old. (Alive) main character

Melissa 29 years old (Alive) side character and main charcaters mother. Side character.

Clara 2 years old ( Alive) main characters sister. Side character

Belle newborn (soon to be born makes an appearance in chapter 3) Side character.

Hector 39 years old (Alive) Main characters kidnapper. Side character.

Willow 13 years old (Alive) Main characters kidnappers other hostage. Side character.

Ensambles throught. 5-50 years. (Alive/dead)

WARNING THIS IS SENSITIVE MATERIAL I DON’T

EXPECT ANYONE UNDER THE AGE OF 13 TO READ. THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR SHOWING SUPPORT AND READING. THANK YOU FOR HELPING OUT A SMALL WRITER.

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