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Story with a big ❤️

"I am in love with this story, which is sweet, sexy, sad and tragic in one. The character development is excellent. The love story is special and heartwarming. Lina Tate is an amazing character, who foght till the end. And learned from the past, and realized, that family and love is the most important. Excellent story. Thank you ❤️❤️❤️ "

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AWESOME

"i love this book so much !!"

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OH TO HAVE A MARCO

"Marriage is scary what if he wont look for my necklace all night?"

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Let's just say I had a Jamaican moment

"In some alternate universe this shit didn't happen the way it happened in this one! I am beyond bomboclaat pissed because the book is a damn good read, the structure, the grammar, the development of the characters was excellent! I read this book in a week because hurricane Beryl was barreling through and I lost power for five days. So imagine my disappointment when the books ended the way it did!! Not a rassclaat! I enjoyed this book until the the last four pages left a bad taste in my mouth! I haven't read anymore books since.... I am officially traumatized😑"

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Enjoyed the trope and plot

"Love the pace, the tension can be felt through the pages. Appreciate the star crossed lovers emotional ride! "

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Marco and Lina

"Amazing book Yet heartbreaking Hope there is more"

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O.M.G

"This book was amazing. I couldn't put it down. It had me so gripped and I was not expecting any of the twists n turns but that just made it all better. Amazing n that ending🫣😢 xx"

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Polo

"I love this novel and the story line except the ending. It would be nice if Marco and Lina end up together till they grow old considering they’ve been apart for 5 years and finally got back together and yet got separated again for life. It’s heart breaking! "

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Marco, Polo

"I thought there was to be a boy as well. lol I'm just distraught that she died before enjoying motherhood for a bit, at least. As is well, ends well. It was still a good read. "

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Marco, polo

"Overall, it is a great story, definitely my a storyline i would choose and prefer to read, i like this book. Characters, in my opinion, are realistic as well and fun to see evolve. "

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Marvelous, Amazing, Emotional & More...

"I love this book! Absolutely amazing, I would buy it if there was a physical copy! I could feel many emotions while I read it and that means that the incredible author wrote marvelously!!"

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I love this book

"The story is amazing.It has an amazing plot and I cannot wait to see how it would unravel in the end."

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Amazing

"I just love reading this book one book I enjoyed reading very interesting lovable and exciting nice job author well written just love this book hope there's more 😊"

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I love it

"I love it, I love the plot I love the story I love the writing"

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Marco, polo

"I've enjoyed reading your story. Full of sexual tension, passion, and cheeky humor. Marco is tall, dark, handsome, and hot! Lena is wise beyond her years, which makes you forget about the age difference. Well written characters and storyline. I look forward to updates to this story. "

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Marco, Polo

"I love love love love love love love love love love loveeee the book so so so much"

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Fun read

"This is such a fun read! I love the family drama as well as the forbidden aspect of the relationship too. Very well written with just a few errors. "

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Love every story

"Noooo the ending of marco and lina 🥺 so sad but it can happen in real life. Not the ending what i expected but is was a good writen end of the story !"

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I love your writing and just everything

"I LOVEEEEE THE WAY U EXPRESS THEIR FEELINGS AND THE WAY U WRITE AND HOW DO U COME UP WITH THAT KIJD OF STORY LINE. THE SAME GOES TO ALL UR OTHER BOOKS IVE READ THEM ALLL and I’m gonna be single 4life cuz my standards are highhhhhh"

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Love you and your stories ❤️❤️❤️

"20 words?! I love all of you and your stories. So pureeee and my wish is that I will get a men like in your books 💅🏼❤️"

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