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Exquisite!!

"This book was a bit complex…hence the negative comment I read but do not let that deteriorate your exceptional writing skills and style. Your words are very powerful and that’s what made this book exquisite!!!! I loved every chapter!!!"

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Loved this story

"This was a fantastic read. I really enjoy the character dynamics including her being a tough strong willed woman! This was a refreshing change from the usual werewolf tale. Usually you read the character dynamic another way, that the man can be insufferable. I enjoyed the change of the tale and I thought the book was well written, with robust vocabulary and unique. Great job author!!"

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Awesome loved the story for!

"Well written excellent character development plot and everything to keeps us glued to the screen"

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Rejection on the Alpha #1

"I read books on here every single day and this book was so suspenseful, so enthralling that I could NOT put it down. It’s not a normal ‘Reject the Alpha’ book so don’t let the name fool you. The twists and turns and all the trials that Celestine has to face, builds her into this powerhouse of a women that transcends her into greatness. Add this to your library IMMEDIATELY!! You will not be disappointed 😁"

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The story pulls you in

"I was drawn to this story because of the description in the beginning of a different take on the Enemies to Lovers/Rejected trope. And the story did not let me down. It is inventive and interesting at all times. The intriguing, expectations-defying Celestine pushes the boundaries of her world. I couldn't wait to see what the writer was going to do with these characters. The characters are complex and well thought out, exhibiting both good and not so good character traits. Celestine keeps on proving her resilience against constant threats to herself, but might at times be seen as abusive herself. In the beginning, Martin is portrayed as vulnerable, keeping the reader guessing. The story were frustrating at times (will Celestine ever accept Martin as her mate? Are they even mates?), but always unpredictable, and turns with the intensity of a dream. The scene setting is detailed and interesting. I was really drawn into Celestine's quest for personal restoration, and I would recommend this story to anyone."

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Grammar

"Wish there was someone who could of proofed this. There are so many errors. My when me should have been used. This story is riddled with errors. Overall I did enjoy the story. "

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Werewolf

"It's a change in the view of the Werewolf World, is a good read with lots of plot twists "

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HamSammich55

"This story was very interesting and had many great plot twists and left me wanting to know what happens next. There is a need for editing as there are a bit of grammatical and spelling errors throughout and easily fixed. Thank you for sharing! ❤️"

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Rejection of the Alpha

"She rejected him, embarrassed him, humiliated him and throughout he begs for her. For me this was overall repetitive. If you describe a Darkling as top dog then at at least follow through with him having moments where he has a spine to not perpetually beg her. Had a promising storyline but all the rejection and begging over and over was just overkill"

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