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Summary

Cabello blanco y descalzo , sus ojos eran como dos hermosos zafiros relejados en el sol . Ella lo recuerda Recuerda el frio que sentía cuando este tocaba su mejilla , pero también era tan cálido - ¿ Tu , puedes verme ? -¿ No debería de hacerlo ? Bella Swan estaba tan sumergida en su tristeza , tan dolida , tan traicionada y usada. Ella vio un hilo doradora y su curiosidad pudo mas y fue a explorar , reencontrándose con él , quien siempre le sacaba risas y la hacia sentir tan amada - Hola de nuevo plantita - No lo olvidaras ¿ Verdad ? - ¡ ¿ Y donde quedaría la diversión de eso si lo hago ? !

Status
Complete
Chapters
27
Rating
5.0 1 review
Age Rating
18+

Importante

Esta historia es cien porciento mía , acepto y permito adaptaciones siempre y cuando tengan mi permiso . De no ser el caso lo reportare y avisare a los que manejan la plataforma , no les cuesta nada pedir el permiso y dar reconocimiento .

Tendrá algunos cambios para que logre poder ajustarse a la historia,

En esta historia . Jack podrá ser visto , pero solo será después de que formo parte de los guardianes .

¡ No olviden votar por favor . Ayuda mucho eso ya que demuestra que les gusta la historia .

Digamos NO a los lectores fantasma !



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