pokemon: empezar de cero

CosmicChaos: This story's plot was an excellent concept and I think that with some editing and fleshing out, it could be great. There are quite a few spelling/grammatical errors and, in parts, it feels a little rushed. All that aside, i still enjoyed it enough to not stop halfway through. It's a shorter story, ...

CINNAZEN: I loved this book. I’m starting on book two and I’m confused because they talk about her being pregnant in the third chapter after they set off on their way to the new location BUT in this book she’s bleeding and not sure if she’s even pregnant? So that’s one of the things that’s confusing. It doesn...

May06: this is so entertaining

CrimsonMabel: I really enjoyed your story! Sydney’s personality, the Vegas setting, and the chemistry between the characters feel very cinematic. I think this would look amazing as a comic/webtoon with proper character designs and illustrations. I actually got some ideas on how your story could be visually adapte...

Sarah: Hey! I really enjoyed your story. It made me wonder how you actually write. Are you someone who plans everything in advance, or do you discover the story as the chapters unfold?

virgie: The flow of this novel is near perfect. Loved the well-developed characters. Sorry that Danny desired his brother's mate. Loved Luna Sheela's support. Liked the way our girl blew away jealous females. Her parents are fun.

Fridah Joseph : It is too interesting I'm afraid I will give up spoilers, every chapter left me wanting more and the ending was well thought out.The main characters just 😍😍🥰🥰And all the other characters played a big role in making this book too good ..... The banter amazing,the humor😂😂😂, the romance 🥵🔥🔥Ju...

Alicia: Always love a good romance story ❤️

Emily: This story was heartwarming and interesting! I loved how the mate bond was portrayed in this story, as love at first sight where both mates were equally invested in each other the whole story! 🥰