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Era su vida la que daba sentido a la mía,0
era aquel bello angel que le regalaba a mi existencia su brillo,0
Porque sus palabras lo eran todo,0
Sus animos eran míos,0
pero hoy,0
el infierno de este mundo me ha consumido,0
Hoy,0
he perdido a mi ángel...0
Hoy tu volaste pero yo no tengo alas...0
volaste, porque te llevaste las mías...0
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Helhall: Before anything else, I’d like to emphasize that I really did like the overall story. Characters were more than two-dimensional, so definitely a plus. I didn’t even mind the shifting points of view.But...There are a couple of things that made reading the story very difficult.1- Punctuation is your f...
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Evtida: It was a very sweet story, but it felt rushed. It didn't really convey the emotions. For example, when the girl was kidnapped, instead of panicking, going crazy, and causing a scene, giving in felt strange... His exaggerated relationship with his gay friend was also odd in my opinion.
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LauraLea: Truly enjoyed this book! I worked with deaf ed in high school so this hit close to home. Will be reading more by this author!!
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Angela: A good story so far. I like Amora's character and the ideas such as, Aiden taken power over the pack and stripping Amora of her title. The drama around how Aiden tortured Amora carving his name into her skin was dramatic which I liked. Gave the story some substance. When Aiden captures Amora and beg...
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Suiihera: OMG, I just finished reading your story, and I really enjoyed it! The world you've created is fascinating. As I was reading, I could easily picture the characters, emotions, and key moments unfolding visually.Have you ever considered adapting it into a visual storytelling format such as a comic, man...
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G: Absolutely loved this book and can't wait to get into the second one!
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