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La bodega de mi corazón

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Summary

Los pensamientos se acumulan en mi cabeza, las letras son la única manera en la que ellos salen sin dañar a nadie, dejan de doler en mi mente y corazón. Las palabras aquí plasmadas son los gritos de liberación.

Status
3yrs ago
Chapters
12
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Mi respuesta a aquel ayer

Pienso en la respuesta desde aquel día...

Perdida en mi mente sin rumbo, sin una vía;

un dibujo, una melodía, una poesía...

Todo llegaba, pero nada permanecía.


Sin embargo, un día algo cambió,

un crítico lo notó,

y desde la lejanía, desde ahí me miró;

desde a distancia, desde ahí me escuchó;

y su calidez la sentía, aun si los centímetros se volvían millas;

y aun si sus ojos se negaban a cerrarse ante lo que él llamaba maravilla,

lo único en mi mente era comprender qué era lo interesante,

¿por qué algo tan poco singular le parecía tan brillante?;

buscaba, pensaba y rondaba, y nunca encontré la respuesta a la interrogante.

¿La figura? Nada por destacar.

¿La mirada? Pasa sin avisar.

¿La sonrisa? Nada que se pueda notar.


Creí que contemplar, pronto se volvería de una materia una tediosa tarea,

pensé que al platicar sonaba con eco, volviéndose una odisea.

Invariablemente, mi ser anhelaba un diferente contacto

para así comenzar un nuevo relato.

Pero la vida no estaba como la quería, cosas pronto pasarían;

la respuesta esa vez sonaría: -tal vez otro día-

creyendo que de nuevo otro día la pregunta aparecería

y con una mente mucho más tranquila

el tiempo, confianza, trabajo y pasión yo te concedería.

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