Love!

"Inspirational story. Loved it"

Beautiful and Inspiring

"Thank you for writing such an inspirational book."

Very Good Story

"I Love the Story. Many Lessons to Learn from it and apply it to my daily life, married life, family and about God. It made my faith Grow stronger more To Jesus Christ. Great Story, Great Job!"

The Solider and the Stripper

"A good novel displaying the love of Jesus. Exactly what I need at a time like this.."

Wow!

"You really made a wonderful impact with this story. The plotline was impressive. I wish you the best. Continue writing about God and telling many people about his unending love. This story was wonderful. I love the technique you used to tell Clayton's life in Afghanistan. However, you should work on the grammatical part of your story. Continue to write, it was marvelous."

Brilliant story line

"Brilliant story line... which strongly gives the message of hope.. faith... God bless.."

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"The Soldier and the Stripper"

"Rachel.........fine job in getting your book exposed with a really fine story. Only a small suggestion is to maybe read your book out loud to do your editing. Seems most of us writers, like yourself are really good with the story line, plot, and writing expressions in reaching the readers.. Technical skills, punctuations, and grammar will be gold for your stories if carefully reviewed during your edit process...........anyhow,, keep up the fine work, and continue writing for all to enjoy for years to come................. william elliott kern"

Unusual story and method of writing

"This novel is a series of monologs. It's easy to imagine it as a stage production in which each actor breaks the fourth wall and speaks from the heart to the audience. There are scenes, but they are described in the words and emotional responses of each of the characters. Florence Kelley and Clayton Pryor grow up hiding their real feelings and trying to please their parents, suppressing all of their real needs and desires. Finally at 30 a crisis arises and they find each other and then Jesus Christ. Through the dramatic form she chose, Rachel made the emotional story come alive and carry her message about Christian life. Some may think she should show more and tell less, but to me this strategy worked very well."

Good story

"It was a good story, I enjoy reading it."

The soldier and the striper

"Very inspiring. Good read"

A good read

"A nice easy simple read. Like where this is going characters parents are a real piece of work. "