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My Neighbor, Jay (18+)

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Summary

*Story Excerpt* My back is pressed against the wall, his face just mere inches from mine while his hands are planted on the wall above my head. A grin so devilish that it would make Satan scared, appears on his face. "I think you're lying to me" he mutters "What makes you think that?" I choke out He cocks his head to the side a little "Your pupils are dilated, you can't look me in the eyes, and I can see the slightest dew on your forehead from the sweat you've started to accumulate" he says, his eyes studying my reactions I continue to avoid eye contact, struggling to find a response and before I can muster a word out, he frazzles me again. His hand travels down the wall to my cheek and he tucks my hair behind my ear before lifting my chin with his finger, so I have no choice but to lock eyes with him. My breathing is quickened, my heart rate increases. "I think you'd like to see just how loud I can make you scream in a matter of minutes" he says with a low and hungry tone I'm in deep trouble. ______________________________________ Evelyn has never been one to interact with her neighbors but that changes when Jay moves just across the hall from her. Evelyn finds him infuriating; however, she also finds him unbearably attractive. Evelyn is determined to keep her relationship with Jay strictly to a neighbor/acquaintance level, but Jay is determined to get more from her.

Status
Complete
Chapters
29
Rating
5.0 (5 reviews)
Age Rating
18+

DISCLAIMER

This story contains mature content such as... Long, graphic, descriptive scenes and strong language. This story is meant for mature audiences only.

If you are not 18 or older, please refrain from reading. If you are uncomfortable with mature language and/or mature content, please refrain from reading.

This story is purely fictional. It is not representative of real life, or based off of any person(s). It is not necessarily meant to be realistic in all aspects.

I appreciate comments and feedback as well as constructive/respectful criticism!

Keep in mind that I am a new writer so there may be errors in storyline as well as grammar or punctuation, but I do my best to avoid them!

Hope you enjoy! Happy reading!


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Good Writing

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Great Character

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Strong Dialog

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sounds interesting so far

3 years

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My Neighbor, Jay (18+)