THE LYING TRUTH   Just One Of Those Girls

Chelsea

10 chapters read

great new read!

"The plot had me not wanting to put this down! There was no break, just when you thought things were cooling down, there was another twist. I liked how it followed multiple characters so you never got bored. It had the cute love story with one character, while it followed the pain and struggle of another character. Great read!"

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carrieangelo

14 chapters read

Intriguing, authentic characters with a twist!

"Loved the authors twisting and turning points through the entire book that left me wanting more! I thought the characters were relatable and the story behind each one was very well developed for the reader to understand where they are coming from. I highly recommend this as a top summer must read! "

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Great bones and tons of potential!

"Although you can tell this is a novel in its raw infant stages (it hasn't been edited), it's got such great potential! It's a wonderful romance about the unexpected ways lives can intertwine with each other and how not dealing with our past can rob us of our future. One reviewer commented about the author spending too much time on the ex's life in the middle of the book, but I think it's time we'll spent. It made the ending so much more emotional. You really love all of these characters and care about what happens to them. I hope this author finds an editor and publisher. This book is a good read."

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Tonia Franks

13 chapters read

The Lying Truth

"This book has potential, but needs a lot of editing, and polishing. I was very confused at times. For example; in the beginning she spoke of a brother, then when writing about her childhood there was no brother, then she once again mentioned a brother then never spoke of him again. I also think way to much time was spent writing about her ex and his love life etc. I was bored at times while reading about her ex and felt that the book was bogged down with way to many long drawn out unimportant details of their lives when I was originally under the impression the book was about Abby and overcoming all of the hardships in her life. This would be a heartwarming book if the majority of the Kevin long drawn out details were removed. "

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