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"I got a super strong Douglas Adams vibe from this story. The voice was crystal clear and consistent, though I would keep an eye on the asides and adverbs. A tiny bit of both goes a long way, but even a dash too much makes life much harder on the reader. Other than that small criticism, I found this to be a solidly-crafted short story by a writer with some chops. Well done!"
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"I liked it. Absurdist, ridiculous, and unexpectedly creepy. I enjoy the style of the prose. I like to think this is just how the two characters live. Stuck in an endless loop of being eaten. It says something deep about life...or something. :D I totally endorse this enjoyable story."
