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What is your opinion?
The lady of the Great Lakes
"Really good story so far! The plot is easy to follow and the characters are engaging! I'm anxious to find out what is going to happen next! "
Commendable
"Not bad! I like the premise of the story, and the many references to history, but the style can fall flat at times. But I know that this is something that can be fixed with plenty of practice, so the future chapters of this story will surely be amazing. Best of luck to the writer!"
