What is your opinion?
Intriguing beginning
"i have to say, this concept kind of has a special place in my heart because my sister and I always used to make believe that we were going to "princess school" rather than regular school and stuff like that. It's an interesting concept, and I like the start. I was intrigued, and I enjoyed the interaction between the characters. It does need some work on the technical aspect of the writing. There were a lot of grammatical issues with the writing that make it a bit confusing at times. If this was cleaned up then things would be a lot clearer and more professional looking. I would read this again if you tidied it a bit. All in all, this has a lot of potential! It just needs a bit of work. Good job!"
Great potential
"Hi I feel like the story has some great potential, it feels like a Disney/Harry Potter mashup. Hard to tell how the story will develop through. What really needs work is the editing and proofreading, but that is something than can be fixed when the story is complete (although personally I feel that typos and errors in general can distract from the story)."
Interesting Start
"I love your concept of a school for wizards, princes, and princesses. I think that Anna and Nick are very interesting characters so far, and I enjoyed what the author did with them in the first chapter. I'd love to get to know the other characters, but I know more will be coming since this is a first chapter. There were several mistakes in grammar and punctuation, but that can easily be fixed by the author. So far though, I think this is interesting and has great potential. I can't wait to continue. :) ***NOTES FOR THE AUTHOR IN THE COMMENTS BELOW."
