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A Twisted Wonderland

"A fun and engaging story with a unique blend of serial killer mystery. I loved spotting the references throughout, and the concept kept me interested from start to finish. It has a lot of potential, and I'm looking forward to reading the next part. Great work!"

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Interesting

"So it's a awesome story 😎 very interesting and suspension 🤔 nice to read 👍 "

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Alice

"Loved the suspense. I never could figure out what was wrong with Alice's legs. Great read!"

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Review of Alice

"Alice is a wonderful engaging concept. I am especially drawn to serial killer plots and the Alice in wonderland approach adds whimsy. I found myself searching for references such as the roses and Cheshire Cat grins. It a lot of fun to read. There are some subtle nuances that still need work but being a work in progress I know it will get there. I look forward to reading the second part. Keep up the good work!"

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